Aaron crowe:
short: 2010
title: fight.

{black screen]
:text [PREPARE, TO. . .]
{AREA of fight}
[Neil falls from the sky and hits the ground with a crunch]
:text overlay [FIGHT! ]
[Edger flys in from the sky]
ED: MR O`MALLY!
Ne: whoa man! dont kill me!
ED: YOU WILL PAY FOR YOUR CRIMES AGAINST KIM!! YOU-
Ne: how do you know kim?.
ED: ahh she never mention me?
Ne: no she never mentioned any badly dressed phyco!
ED:p..phycos are in this year!
[edger dodges a punch for neil]
ED: well let me introduce myself!

once apon a time Kim was pure and inoccent but that changed as her first boyfreind as a jerk.... and a massive jerk at that,
but there was some one who vowed that NO jerk will date her again!

ED: IM KIMS EVIL BROTHER!. its nice to meet you.
Ne: same. i never knew she had a brother.
ED: well i killed the last 6 boys freinds so she may have left off some details...but i digress. PRE-PARE TO DIE!

awesome fight scene.

Ne: HEY! when you were born, did the doctors turned around and slap your mother?
ED: how dare you get my mother involed you are a jerk!. DIE!

more awesome fight scene.

ED: hey look up idiot in the dictonary and see what you find
Ne: what a picture of me?
ED: NO! the defintion of the word idiot which you are!

[kim runs into the scene]
[pokemon action homage part]
text bubble: KIM PEGG APPEARED!

Kim: NEIL!! WATCH OUT FOR MY EVIL BROTHER!!!

[Neil and Edgar both stop and look at her]

KI: Oh you already met....
ED:yeah
Ne:yeah....
[neil head butts edger and finshes with a round house kick to the head.]

ED: arg!
Text: O.K
[dramatic music fills the air]

kim: oh neil i knew you would defeat him, i love you with all my heart!
Ne: kim you are the princess peach to my mario, i love you more than my xbox and ps3 combined,
you are the only one for me, my real soul mate...i love you too!.
kim; you had me at mario!
{they embrase in arms]
Ne: your so beautiful it hurts
kim: its your nose that hurts...
[dramatic music as Edger is revived.]
ED:......what you just said was one of the most idoticist things ive ever heard. any one who listened to it is dummer because of you. may god have mercy on your soul because your meeting him soon.
[ed super punches neil and he falls straight to the ground]
kim: oh yeah i forgot to tell you hes got extra lives
Ne: WHAT!
ED: hey kim arnt i great brother, hes a ass trust me forget about him!
[Neil appears and punches which shoots him across the area]
Ne: you think your so great! your missing the point, you gotta have love!
[flash of light as text and Neil get a LEVEL UP!]
ED: NO THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE, YOUR A JERK I KNOW IT!
Ne: NO YOURE THE JERK!

NEAIL SUPER PUNCHES ED AND HE DISAPEARS IN A TO NOTHIN!

Kim: thanks he was a jerk....but theres only one thing now.
neil: and that is?
kim: your going to have to meet my parents now.

FADE OUT IN TEXT: fight!

END. :P